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Danni Colello
my blog will show you the mind of a young developing writer.
"There is no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside you." Maya Angelou
my blog will show you the mind of a young developing writer.
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I think my homepage is functioning because I do have everything for the most part on there, I just need to first add the link for my “Intrinsic goals”. Also, I need to develop the spatial aspect of this page its kind of just 6 or so lines of single sentences. I plan on bringing my quote up to the top right under my header image and then add a spacer before my introduction, over spring break. I also might switch out my quote for a longer one with a little more depth also. About I know my about page is flourishing. I might edit the spatial aspect by combining some sentences to make very short paragraphs. Also, I need to go through and capitalize all my I’s and capitalize the Q for the Proust Questionnaire. I have plenty of multi-modal content on this page though. Narrative project I believe this page is functioning almost flourishing, I need to go in and turn my blog posts from bulleted to complete sentences. I need to include more blog posts that we’ve done and need to correct very few grammatical errors such as capitalizing I’s again. I also need to develop my intro here a bit more. I plan to add more context over spring break. However almost everything asked is on this page and I believe is spaced rather well. Research project My research page is functioning but barley. I have the intro / blurb however it needs an extreme makeover: blog edition. Once we return from break and I have more understanding what our research project is about I will update the page promptly and add more content. Also need to remove the directions from beginning of the year. Contact My contact page is flourishing I have everything asked, header photo, quote about writing, the blurb to contact me, and a link to my Instagram. Honestly even though I have everything this page feels empty still I wish I could think of something else I could add. Blog My blog page is flourishing I have all blogs required up there also my quote and what my blog is about. The only thing I could do to improve this page is figure out how to move the darn things at the bottom of my page to the top right. I’ve tried a bunch of times, but I don’t know why it wont move there it might just be the layout. Draft 1 I think my first draft was very solid. I tried my best to just remember everything I possibly could about that night (it was hard because I repressed a lot from my childhood) and just get all the rawness out. To be honest I’m kind of surprised I didn’t have more to say I mean it was the most pivotal moments in my life and I only initially had about eight hundred words to say about it. However, I plan on going in for draft two and adding more moments of telling the reader the background of the family and how everyone interacts and the roles we play in the house in order to develop a more emotional connection to young Danni and the mother and brother. Also, I might edit the ending just a tad, make it a little more short & sweet.
3 Comments
Julia
3/10/2019 08:34:49 pm
Girlll!!! I love your webpage! I also think you really went through and analyzed it as well, I can tell you did this by your notes on it.
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Sabatino
3/11/2019 09:26:28 am
Julia provides useful insights into your well-being assessment and into your presentation of the memoir. It appears you have a clear plan for revising your web page and blog post authorship. I look forward to see where your website it headed...
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Zahed I.
3/11/2019 11:02:38 pm
Hey Danni! Well-being assessment and well-organized. I agree with your assessment.
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